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[Nikky]

*You go at the bank and you notice a poster sticked on the front wall.*
*You decide to read it*


((Yeah, i know the pic is just too simple.. Also made a small fail while making the website, i put Nikky as head scientist instead of Martin Kingston:S))

[Anthony_Weber]

(( This reminds me of Atilliary Facilities... This is a fair attempt for a science organisation, but white-on-red doesn't look like a professional business. Especially when you wrote "science and stuff". This is just some honest feedback so someone else doesn't say the same thing in a ruder way. ))

[Guest]

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We make new machines, we advance science to a higher level, and we try researching new resources although making deadly weapons too, but they will NOT be released to ammunations/public they will be kept by a special team of the X-Corporations, able to only give it to trained SWAT members or national guard trained guardsmen.

This seems too much like Atilliary Facilities, except with the difference that Atilliary never made any weaponry. Besides, "X" is too common in fictional stories today. If your going to copy something, make sure you know what your doing, and make it well. Atilliary didn't have any fancy glistening, but it was organised.

Things we did untill now: Grenade launcer on weapons

If your making deadly weapons, it's not the best idea on telling the whole world.
Yes, Grenade launchers are not something to brag about, nor can you make Grenade launchers on weapons.

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