Edward Veatress [SD]

[Edward Veatress]

In Character

First Name: Edward

Last Name: Veatress

Gender: Male

Race: Mexican-American

Date of Birth: 4/9/1979

Place of Birth: San Fierro

Current active address: 4 Palomino Creek

Available phone number(s): 1010069

Education: High School Diploma, US Army Ranger, Cooking School

Are you currently in occupation?:N/A
If yes, what is your current occupation?:

Have you had any previous occupations?: Yes
If yes, what were your previous occupations?: Saucier (Person who makes sauce in restaurants, very important)

Do you own a current valid driver license?: Yes
If yes, has it ever been suspended?:

Do you posses any knowledge or experience in the law enforcement area?: Not much but I have seen many Local Law Enforcement in Iraq and USA
Have you ever been arrested?: No
If yes for what charges/crimes?:

Have you ever served time in prison?: No
If yes for what charges/crimes?:

Biography: Edward Veatress was born in San Fierro to two immigrant parents, Maria and Jose Veatress, as a child, Edward was bullied by local Chinatown kids and Americans for his ethnicity and daily life. He eventually grew to 17 and went to cooking school where he became a Saucier for a local Chinatown restaurant. He was eventually fired for messing with the Chef's daughter. After searching for a job he slumped in his Apartment and saw a TV ad for the US Army. He went straight to the Recruitment Center and joined, he met Sergeant Ramirez. His favorite buddy, eventually Sergeant Ramirez was KIA but Edward was a Corporal by then, they called him in and told him he was the new Sergeant and so Edward returned to San Fierro to recruit and train as Sergeant Ramirez. Eventually He left at 29, a middle aged man who lived by survival. Edward bought a house, a car and lived his life out until he heard about SD Recruitment, he now filled out an application, waiting for SD Sheriff Terry Winston to reply back



Out of Character

Age: 13
Country: USA

Server nickname: Edward Veatress

Past characters and factions: Jennifer Sullivan, Edward Sullivan, Jake Bourne, John Wu, Robert Bell, Ray Bourne/ Sheriff Department, Lasombra, Grove Street, Camarilla, Fegarri Pedia, EMS,

How long have you been a member of this server?: A week after release

Have you ever been banned from this server (if yes, why)?: No

Why do you wish to join this faction?: Because I made a crucial mistake of CKing Jake Bourne and this is my last option, I want to join on this character also.
Have you ever played on any other role play servers (if yes, which)?: Yes I have, ZORP, ESRP, GRRP, LSRP, RRP, USRP, CORP, FCRP, FCRP 2.0
Do you posses any law enforcement knowledge or role play experience?: Yes
Have you read the application rules?: Yes
Any other comments: Nope


Role-Play

Explain what is role play and its basics: To act as the Character you have and act as you would in Real-Life
Explain what is meta game and give two different examples: When using OOC Information for Ic Situations

Example 1:
John Wu: Hello, whats your name?
Jake_Beef: LOL John read meh head '

Example 2:
John Wu [Radio]: Im gonna find who the killer is...
Jake_Beef [Radio]: Dude its Bishop, didn't you see him kill him with the Knife lol

Explain what is power game and give two different examples: Power-gaming is when you Force another player to do unrealistic actions
Example 1:
Jake_Beef shoot John Wu using his Finger Gun that has Auto-Head-shots
John_Wu [OOC]: Thats Powergaming

Example 2:
Jake Beef kills everyone using a Mini-gun from the car trunk
John Wu [OOC]: Power-Gaming man...

Explain what is "gun from ass": When scrolling a heavy weapon such as a M4 or a Sniper Rifle

Give an example of a good detailed role play /me: /me grabs his Magnum 375. and aims at the robber with the weapon, and moves his aiming down as a sign for him to drop his weapon


Give an example of a bad role play /me: /me begins to shoot the government using a Minigun from his pocket.

[Terry Winston]

(( i already denied this charcter?))

[Edward Veatress]

(( Wasnt it closed? Thats all you said ))

[Nero]

((

Mr Veatress,

Your application has been denied due to your criminal activity, We suggest you clean up your act and hand your self in for any previouse offence's. Your application can be re posted in two weeks at wich time we will review your situation.

DENIED

Sheriff
Terry Winston

Did you do it? >.>

))

[Edward Veatress]

Do'h. HOLD This.))

[Edward Veatress]

Letter to Sheriff Terry Winston

Dear Mr. Winston, I do not have a criminal record at all. Today I talked with Deputy Mckay about this and he said I wasnt on the CRD. Im wondering still why I was denied.

[Terry Winston]

*Letter sent back to the sender*

You name is know to the police, we will be investigating you once that is over you will be free to reapply.

Sheriff
Terry Winston

[Edward Veatress]

Letter Sent

Thank you for it, but the investigation was dropped by a Detective Kevin or something like that due to lack of evidence, and I'd like to withdraw my application due to I being Re-instated into EMS, I hope you acknowledge my decision, and excuse me for the trouble

Until then, Edward Veatress

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