Palomino Matters Issue 1

[Lloyd McFadden]

((You will need to right click and select view image to view it properly.))
((If your having trouble looking at the images Ive just uploaded a pdf format one which works well, heres the link. Issue 1 I will keep the photos here though incase people cant access the site.Enjoy.))
*You walk into a Shop*
*You pick up the Newspaper*
*You look at the front Cover*

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*You turn the page*

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*You finish reading it*

((Please leave feedback, also wasnt sure if this should go in the news section. This was made over 2 days so it is not as good as it could be, be sure to check out my next issue ))

[Midnight]

*Alessandro Farinetti takes a papers and reads it*

Finally a well made newspaper,I think ol' Constipator will get in a trash bin after this.

*Laughs*

*Alessandro Farinetti carries the newspaper with him*

[Chris_Bell]

((I luvs it. But you are getting arrested for everything you have done,dont forget ))

[Yuudai_Tanaka]

Beautiful, simply beautiful. Keep at it, I enjoyed every second of it, and I wouldn't take it back for anything in the world... well besides a new edition. Looking foward to more, and hopefully I can be in an article one day :p.

[Lloyd McFadden]

((Thanks for the Comments guys, Im hoping to do it weekly so I can manage it properly. And I shot this together in a day so the next one should be better.))

[tonice6]

**Derek Thompson enters a store and buys a newspaper for 40cents**
**Then he reads it...*

Damn. This is the best article I've ever seen.. I got to contact this guy.

[xRaul-Guerrero]

(( Best newspaper so far, love the format; Keep it up. ))

[Lloyd McFadden]

((Thanks for the comments guys, Ive just added spoilers to them so they dont take up much room. Also, Check it out on the site here Issue 1, its easier to veiw the newspaper.))

[Akane_Shine]

(((Sponsored by the Shine corporation- I am pumping a lot of money into this paper ICly its mis-spelt Shin but you read it as Shine. Wonderful job, man... Great)))

Akane shine picks up the paper and smiles. He clicks his fingers to a near-by butler looking man and purchases the paper.

An investment my father would of been proud of... With the local news in my hands and more business ventures on the rise each day... Palmino is about to see a lot of change. Akane grins and walks out into the rainy streets of Palimino, his associate holding an umbrella over his head wherever he goes.

[Guest]

A man pays for one of the new paper and gasps.
He takes it home and reads it on his sofa.
"Damn! I got competition! And he's god damned better than me!"
He lays the paper down on his couch.
"Alright, that Shak will become a Shack once I'm done with him!"
He calms down.
"Actually, just let it slide. Just..."
He puts on a blue coat and hat and heads for the door.
"Just change the evidence, twist the stories, take the pictures, Get Information, post...'
He looks around and grins to himself.
"...And spread the lies..."

[The Kat]

Nicely done... I just hope that it might be longer and about more than just Palomino. Maybe you could add in a few advertisements about clubs and such?

((Dadadadadadadadadadada[LOW] Kill everyone [NORMAL] Dadadadadadadadada

[Lloyd McFadden]

((Haha Constipator. You can do whatever you want but I wont back down. I always keep a smile on my face ))

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