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Character Profile
by Simon Bourne Tue Mar 29, 2011 6:29 am
Name:Bishop Marcus Bourne
Age:23
Height:6'(Feet) Tall
Weight:89-91 KGs
Appearance:Dark Brown Short Hair. Blue Eyes. Always seen wearing a Black Leather Jacket (Open). Blue Jeans.White T-Shirt.White Sneakers.
Quick Description:Rest of Description should be created by you either ICly or OOCly in the forums or the game.
Age:23
Height:6'(Feet) Tall
Weight:89-91 KGs
Appearance:Dark Brown Short Hair. Blue Eyes. Always seen wearing a Black Leather Jacket (Open). Blue Jeans.White T-Shirt.White Sneakers.
Quick Description:Rest of Description should be created by you either ICly or OOCly in the forums or the game.
Simon Bourne- Sheriff's Department
- Personal Text : Only the dead find the true end of War
Posts : 1858
Join date : 2011-01-16
Age : 28
Location : Somewhere in Nevada.
Re: Character Profile
by Anthony_Weber Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:03 am
If I understood correctly, you're asking people to propose a quick character description that you deem to be appropriate. YOU are the one who needs to make the character description, but it seems that I have time to waste this morning. So here you go, build on this:
Edit:
And just a little bit of friendly criticism -- Your character doesn't seem to show one single weakness or disadvantage of any kind. Search for "Mary Sue" on Google and you'd know what I'm talking about. ^^ Since to be very honest, players on this server have an extremely high tendency of creating Mary-Sue-type characters....
- Bishop Bourne: A quick character description, OOC:
- Still a rather mysterious character to the general populace, he is one who stands up for the ones who he quickly takes side with. Secretly, he is a vampire, with an immense amount of strength and an inhuman speed. As much as he seems to act like a white-knight, he is a radical man who is never afraid to assault people who are assaulting others without any questions asked, nor warnings. That being said, he could be one of the most dangerous, unstable men one could ever know. He used to work as an agent with the Federal Bureau of Investigation, and was once into aviation, as he fought as a war pilot. He is quite often found listening to heavy, adrenaline-pumping music on his iPod.
Edit:
And just a little bit of friendly criticism -- Your character doesn't seem to show one single weakness or disadvantage of any kind. Search for "Mary Sue" on Google and you'd know what I'm talking about. ^^ Since to be very honest, players on this server have an extremely high tendency of creating Mary-Sue-type characters....
Last edited by Anthony_Weber on Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:06 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Added crit)
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